Victorians
Year 5 recently had a visualisation session in the hall where they prentended they were child labourers in Victorian times working down a mine. They had to crawl through a small mine (a covered table) and could even smell the flame of a candle! They worked extremely sensibly and it created some amazing writing.
Here is Jack's from class 6 (Miss Frowen wishes she could write like this!!)
I sigh as I walk into a field of rain knowing I have to go to the mine to work. I see the huge black hole waiting for me to step in and I won’t be coming out for another 12 hours. I step inside and finally I’m out of the rain but this is worse than the rain. I start to open the doors but I have to dodge the cart which was coming at me as fast as a cheetah. My arms and legs went numb as I looked at a spider creep up a wall. I was as angry as a bull in a cage because the exit was just there but I wouldn’t be out for a while.
By Jack
4 comments:
What a cracking piece of writing! Keep it up!
GREAT WORK
That Deserves 9 merits
Great work.
Some house points are coming!!
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